Hey Jarrod! It's looking really great! I only have two minor critiques. Both pertaining to the bottom shelf. Everything else looks perfect!
It would seem as if your donut ring at the bottom could be pushed a bit to stage rights so that it makes contact with that corner, right now it appears to be standing up on end just a bit.
Also, your cone filled with spheres looks awesome, and I actually don't have a critique on that per se, as much as I do about your choice in camera angle. While you're camera choice does make your shot look a bit more organic and interesting, we lose the sense that that cone is in fact a cone. Always try and make sure that your elements are clear and visible so the audience doesn't have to guess to much as to what they're seeing.
All in all, you're on the right track and everything looks great! :)
I'm agreeing with Johnny about the torus and camera angle. Everything else is great! I just started on mine too.. Can't wait to have our first lesson on Wednesday to go through everything! :)
Hey Jarrod! It's looking really great! I only have two minor critiques. Both pertaining to the bottom shelf. Everything else looks perfect!
ReplyDeleteIt would seem as if your donut ring at the bottom could be pushed a bit to stage rights so that it makes contact with that corner, right now it appears to be standing up on end just a bit.
Also, your cone filled with spheres looks awesome, and I actually don't have a critique on that per se, as much as I do about your choice in camera angle. While you're camera choice does make your shot look a bit more organic and interesting, we lose the sense that that cone is in fact a cone. Always try and make sure that your elements are clear and visible so the audience doesn't have to guess to much as to what they're seeing.
All in all, you're on the right track and everything looks great! :)
I'm agreeing with Johnny about the torus and camera angle. Everything else is great!
ReplyDeleteI just started on mine too.. Can't wait to have our first lesson on Wednesday to go through everything! :)
Dita